FIC: Loaded March Part 11: Desperate Measures

[loaded_march]

Geez.  It's about time.  I swear, I'm my own worst editor.


** Note that I've had to split this part into two chapters for AO3.



Part Ten: Desperate Measures
Word Count: 91K
Summary:
Excalibur lost a battle, their advantage, their loved ones, their heart and their soul.

A broken Captain, a shattered team, and no one to trust.  Their mission has been full of secrets, the present is the broken past, and the only thing that's left to do is to enact desperate measures.

Comments

[giraffatrolli.livejournal.com]

I feel a little guilty gobbling down all your weeks of hard work in one sitting, but OMG that was Crazy Awesome!!! (Closing in on 2 am, please forgive lack of proper English or general mental coherency.)

So many balls in the air, atmosphere, emotions and tension galore. A somewhat surprising amount of bodily harm, oh those poor puppies. Great use of Will (Codes! Hah!), happy to see the girls get lots of attention, and Hunith FTW!! :) :)

Very few quibbles, you don't need no stinkin' beta do you?! :)

Excellent chapter. Here's hoping the RBB does a nice brain-freshener job, and that TW doesn't distract too much from the spawning of LM12... :)

Thank you again! (and only mild curses on the darn cliffhanger... Another one?!? Really?!? Gaaaahhh!!)