I feel a little guilty gobbling down all your weeks of hard work in one sitting, but OMG that was Crazy Awesome!!! (Closing in on 2 am, please forgive lack of proper English or general mental coherency.)

So many balls in the air, atmosphere, emotions and tension galore. A somewhat surprising amount of bodily harm, oh those poor puppies. Great use of Will (Codes! Hah!), happy to see the girls get lots of attention, and Hunith FTW!! :) :)

Very few quibbles, you don't need no stinkin' beta do you?! :)

Excellent chapter. Here's hoping the RBB does a nice brain-freshener job, and that TW doesn't distract too much from the spawning of LM12... :)

Thank you again! (and only mild curses on the darn cliffhanger... Another one?!? Really?!? Gaaaahhh!!)