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loaded_march ([personal profile] loaded_march) wrote2014-01-07 08:25 pm

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3,000 more words on LM#14, and firmly in well, this scene is firmly past the it should have ended 1,000 words ago territory.


Houston, Houston, I have a runaway storyline.  It was impacted by a stray meteorite and is now tumbling out of its projected trajectory.  The engines are malfunctioning and they're bingo fuel.  They're equipped with a vacuum cleaner hose, two arm's lengths of duct tape, a broken barometer, and an empty Lays' potato chip bag, regular flavour.  There's just enough power to run the MacGyver emulator for twenty-three seconds.  Please advise, over.


FFS, it's only in the second chapter.  What the fuck happened?

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